Sales Page Audit

£475.00

Make Your Sales Page Earn Its Keep

Your sales page has one job: convert.

If it’s currently:

too nice
too vague
too much
too little
too hyped
not hyped enough
almost there but somehow… not
or simply giving “please buy?” instead of “try me.”

Then yes, there’s a problem.

The good news? I can fix it.

In this Sales Page Audit, I go through your page line by line — headline to checkout — and pinpoint the exact moments where interest drops, logic wobbles, or your reader quietly exits the tab.

Then I give you a clear, annotated roadmap that sharpens your message, strengthens your flow, and reminds your sales page that rent is, in fact, due.

(Possibly literally.)

What does it get you?

A full, strategic audit of your sales page and checkout only.
(Please note: this is not a funnel assessment.)

This sales page audit is perfect for:

Anyone with a solid offer buried under underwhelming or overzealous copy, or women who want their launch to sound as premium as it should.

By purchasing this service you agree to be bound to its terms & conditions.

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Make Your Sales Page Earn Its Keep

Your sales page has one job: convert.

If it’s currently:

too nice
too vague
too much
too little
too hyped
not hyped enough
almost there but somehow… not
or simply giving “please buy?” instead of “try me.”

Then yes, there’s a problem.

The good news? I can fix it.

In this Sales Page Audit, I go through your page line by line — headline to checkout — and pinpoint the exact moments where interest drops, logic wobbles, or your reader quietly exits the tab.

Then I give you a clear, annotated roadmap that sharpens your message, strengthens your flow, and reminds your sales page that rent is, in fact, due.

(Possibly literally.)

What does it get you?

A full, strategic audit of your sales page and checkout only.
(Please note: this is not a funnel assessment.)

This sales page audit is perfect for:

Anyone with a solid offer buried under underwhelming or overzealous copy, or women who want their launch to sound as premium as it should.

By purchasing this service you agree to be bound to its terms & conditions.

How does it work?

1. Purchase the audit. You’ll receive an email with your estimated start date (typically about two weeks from date of purchase) and a link to complete your short intake form.

2. Fill in the form. After you fill in your form, your start date will be confirmed. This will also be your chance to finalise any queries you may have.

3. It’s audit time! Once your state date arrives, I’ll review your site in full, and within 5-7 working days you’ll receive your written audit with actionable recommendations and sample rewrites, including:

A line-by-line critique of your sales page copy (PDF format)
Marked-up recommendations and suggested rewrites for improvement
Notes on structure, psychology, and persuasive hierarchy
Quick wins + deeper rewrites prioritised by conversion impact

Important timeline note: Audits are scheduled to begin around two weeks from your booking date, and once underway, your full report is delivered within 5-7 working days. Please allow for this in your personal timelines.